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Christmas

By: Demondogs
folder M through R › Pitch Black
Rating: Adult ++
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Disclaimer: I do not own Pitch Black, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Frustrations

Christmas
Chapter 4
Frustrations
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Recap: 'Damn kid! How did I screw up so bad? I can't fuckin' keep
this shit up!' Riddick sighed and fell in to a sub-conscious sleep.
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Jack woke up early during the night. 'What is that....Why am I so
warm?' She looks over and saw a dark form next to her in the bed. She
listened quietly to his breathing and knew it was Riddick. 'Yea. He's asleep,
but this has GOT to stop! This fuckin' leavin' to have sex and coming
back thinkin' everything's gonna be fine...Well it fuckin isn't!' With
that thought Jack shoved Riddick out of the bed and onto the freezing
floor effectively waking him up.

"What the FUCK KID!" Riddick yelled at her retreating back. Ignoring
him, Jack slammed the door to the bedroom and locked herself in the
bathroom. 'What the hell did I do? Must be that time of the month again....'
Riddick left Jack alone thinking it was best for his well-being as well
as hers.....but mostly for his. He decided to go into the padded gym
room to work off his anger.
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Meanwhile, Jack was sitting on the floor in the bathroom punching the
floor. 'What the fuck is wrong with him? Why can't....ugg! This isn't
working! I think I need to get his attention....but how? Maybe if I
workout for a while I'll be able to think better....' Jack got up off the
floor, unlocked the door and headed to the gym.
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Riddick was busy punching the bag swinging from a chain on the ceiling
of the ship. He was just starting to work up a sweat when he heard
something. At first he thought, 'That better not be Jack comin' in to piss
me off', but when he listened harder, he realized it definitely wasn't
her....
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Jack froze at the door to the gym....'What was that? It sounded like
someone out side the ship......'
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TBC......
If you want you could vote who you want to be at the door....

1.) Some Kid selling something
2.) Toombs
3.) A different Merc
4.) Someone with a job for Riddick
5.) Some random animal like a dog or something looking for food

Thanks to.....
My wondreful beta, Siegen. Who made it so much easier for me to update faster!
S: Hope this chapter explains alittle beter...if not I think it will soon.......LOL! I'm Happy that you're enjoying It! Here ya' go!
FitMama: Thank you! Exactly! Heres the next chappie! Hope you continue to enjoy it!
Ren3017: Thanking you! I guess poking me worked huh?
uknown: Sorry about the short chappies....but I don't have anyof this written down....I just kinda' type as I think! Hopefully I'll try to write a longer chappie for you!
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